Responses
Well you see... I'll go with cheating...the one of only thing that I despise is cheaters. Do hell with giving in and forgiving... I don't care about justice in this. The thing that disturbs most is..easy going with the flow and cheating his lover(⌒▽⌒).
A lot of readers don't mind cheating and a lot of readers hate it. Cheating characters provide opportunities for more story lines. What I think readers don't like is when the person being cheated on gives in and forgives too easily. We want justice. We want to see the cheater get his ass handed to him on a platter of "fuck you, man-whore." We want to see him cry rivers of emotional pain, torment, and regret. It would be much more satisfying than the seme saying, "Oh, my bad. I do love you, so I'll drop my phones in the water NOW that I see how sad you are after a year of going out, even though I should have been man enough to avoid hurting you in the first place."
What pissed me off the most was this seme's possessiveness - not wanting the uke to be touched by anyone else. How is this fair? Do as I say and not as I do? Get over yourself, you self-centered hypocrite. I hate you.
Anyway, I think there could have been a better story here, but the plot twists were a bit far-fetched, the character's reasons for doing what they did were lame, and the ending felt shallow.