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So far I read this story it's actually not that bad as the comments here states although I...

Akiraama January 25, 2021 7:13 am

So far I read this story it's actually not that bad as the comments here states although I understand that the females are a bit annoying but I read some far worse stories were the females were so annoying that it was far worse as to look in a bottomless pit. I was kinda surprised irritated of the harem cliche thing with the aphrodisiac but I could get over it as they turned it that the loli elv misunderstood it. Still I really dislike this. In such stories it's just a bother to have soo much females as support characters. I like it mor if it's well balanced. Of course we have again our strong as hell MC but it's not as I dislike it thou but you could make his character more interesting like be a real bad ass berserker or more the opposite of it but not as annoying naive and a gigolo. The last one's I really dislike in MC characters. The only character I REALLLLLLY like is the horse hes kinda awsome xD. We have a lot loopholes where it could be better written in the story line as I have the feeling it's not thaaaaat catching as other similar stories. I read a lot of bunch in this gerne type and I want to try myself if can write and sketch an real nice story.


Well now to the art. Here I can't really say much as I really like it. The art is really detailed and to me really calming. I love the outlines so much of this. I can really tell the artists style and how nice it is Drew. I really love it. The only thing that bothers me is that the art is really great and amazing but the story could be improved on a few points like... Could we get a few hot dudes for the female audience? (/TДT)/..... It's so bad that I even turn the horse in one nice hot dude T.T......I'm kinda ashamed..... Anyway how can I explain the things with the story? I can't put it in words but it could be better. The art style is nice but doesn't deserve the storyline... It's just my own opinion and I will still read this till the end and I hope he will soon make an end to the chaos here.

Hmmm sorry........ (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

Responses
    Spiderlily January 25, 2021 4:50 pm

    I love this comment

    Ayumie Steam January 26, 2021 3:55 am

    I love this comment too. And so far i love kokuyou..

    Akiraama January 26, 2021 2:21 pm
    I love this comment Spiderlily

    Thank you xD

    Akiraama January 26, 2021 2:22 pm
    I love this comment too. And so far i love kokuyou.. Ayumie Steam

    Hehe me too it's an bad ass for a horse

    Exploits June 20, 2021 6:12 pm

    Exactly. For oneI think it makes women look like cheap floozies who have no self respect if they are willing to share a guy with like 10 other girls. Plus it really is sad that there are never any male main cast other than the mc. i mean male bonding would be nice to see, to have hi have a confidant and a friend to talk about stuff he can't with the sex toys (cause ultimTely that's what they amount to in these stories)

    Akiraama June 21, 2021 1:37 am
    Exactly. For oneI think it makes women look like cheap floozies who have no self respect if they are willing to share a guy with like 10 other girls. Plus it really is sad that there are never any male main cas... Exploits

    I think the author potrait the females totaly wrong. I mean not many girls are like that Xc this is one of the aspect that bothers me in a lot of storys.