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I almost didnt read this because of the comments - which would have sucked because this is actually quote good.
Yes, there is too much info at some points but that can easily be skipped.
The art is stunning and the fl is interesting. I've been wondering who the male lead is since a of the potential guys are stunning - I have a guess but it's also fun to not know right away and get to know the guys.
Also I really want to know the age of what's his name. It's really not easily graspable and that makes me a bit uncomfy with it.
Welp, guess I gotta go read the novel now.
So I started this because I was curious and...its okay, I guess? It started out somewhat interesting but thay got lost for me pretty fast.
Chapter 4 is completely messed up orderwise.
Everything is happening really fast and the pacing feels completely off. There isn't a real depth to the characters and the mc's don't really get to know each other but are suddenly acting super crummy, even though a moment before she was super insecure and anxious about everything.
There is not much explanation to the world-building or structures, really just the surface of the surface. Also our fl doesn't share much of her backstory with us - also just the surface again as to explain her demeanor. No emotional depth here as well. Its a bummer, because of the lost potential.
Also her randomly acquiring a power - Also with a super short explanation and here being able to use it without actually training or anything and not being mentioned for a while and then suddenly being a thing again seems just like lazy writing to me.
I'll probably continue reading this just to see where its going and if certain story points will continue/be revisited or if they'll end up as lose strings.