I've been trying to rebuild my lists and came across this one I had read years ago. I read the official up to 16 as a reminder, and noticed that in 15 a character calls her the daughter of a duke (wrong) . . . and the unofficial one calls her the daughter of a count (which is correct, even though they used the kingdom name in both instead of the family name - which isn't to say it's very wrong, but had they written it as "Count of the Sofen Kingdom" or "a Count of Sofen" would make it more accurate).
DO NOT keep reusing the same pictures more than a dozen times during the story. Even 3 times would be too much.
DO NOT gift your girl a pair of stiletto heels, then make her run through the forest in them.
DO NOT change the leads name 15 chapters before the end of the story. You can hang on a little longer!
DO select a better saintess chair. The evil saintess candidate had a better looking chair. It was probably empty for 10 years because it was fugly.
DO promote someone who refuses to marry someone evil, instead of kicking them to the curb. I feel like the green haired family got no punishments for colluding with the enemy.
DO show me how that chocolate fountain works without electric or batteries or magic!!











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