He has good points and all but terrible execution.
I'm gonna pull the same shit the student is doing if I my books don't get published.
"Is it starting to feel real now?" son this is middle school taekwondo get your head outta your ass.
The premise sounded like absolute peak though. Someone steal this and make an actual webcomic.
"When it's over, let's jump." hold on this might be peak?
"I did not think I would be refused."
bro you're firing your employee you think he'd just smile and say "Thank you for taking away the job I wanted since childhood!1!1"
The AI cover is taking me out. We've reached peak slop fest.
Also maybe this is just a hot take of mine but like why did the manga start off like that? I wish it just started off from the moment when the shit was thrown at the MC. Like that's a better place to start imo.