This is probably how some gay/bi men feel when reading some of the yaois out there (mostly the ones at least a couple of years old). There's no plot to this, it just fetishizes a lesbian relationship. It's creepy reading a story with an older woman and a middle schooler as a couple (and said middle schooler acts like she's 20). This made the otherwise hot sex scenes seem creepy.
All in all, I feel like this is just a straight-man's fantasy about what a lesbian relationship is like. Or a straight woman, trying to make money in the yuri genre (see that equally disgusting IMO manga, Okane Ga Nai, for a yaoi equivlient).
Not to shit on those who like it, mind you. Just saying, in response to the other comments on here, that if you're looking for a yuri to try, I wouldn't recommend this. I would instead recommend Girl Friends, Excited Feelings, or Their Story.
I feel you, cause everytime I read through the pages I keep asking myself on when are they going to go on lovey dovey dates or have one of those heartfelt moments, endearing compliments and not just focus on sexual interactions during the relationship
Yeaaah thoses others Yuri are so great >A<
I don't know... I agree with you but... I thing deux things are missing. Maybe. First, the questions, the... Fear ?... The little girl don't seems so innocent, I think she is aware pf what she's doing... When she kiss her and all... (but she is innocent too because... She make things like a kid at first. This Is... A little irresponsible... But fortunatly, the woman is kind.)
And the questions about the age gap and the homosexual relationship... :/ not too much. They can don't care about That, I don't really mind... But... I don't know, This manga don't make me feel like... A real relationship, as you say... :/
And and and
FUCK
YOU HAVE OVARIES
YOU DO HABE FEELLLSSS- so... Why aren't you excited, blushing... Why don't you discover something together... :'(
When she touch your legs (I don't really remember but... I think she dis that-), make something ! Blushing or... Being embarrassed... You don't have a poker face... :( if you're excited show it to her... :( if You don't do more to her, at least smile... TAT more than that- or make a sad face if you're not happy :'(
I- :'( pff-
Move your buuutt and ne a real womaaan-
And take responsabilities- you're are happy and lovey-dovey- but- please =A= a mittle, okay ? A little... :(
Lol
This Is what I thought while reading This...
But is was not... Horrible... Hm... But... Some things are missing...
Your arguments are right...This also happens with at least half of yaoi mangas: they fetishizes an homosexual relationship, it's basically a straight-woman's fantasy about what a gay relationship is like. Actually, a lot of yaoi are a straight-woman's fantasy about an heterosexual relationship because they tend to show one of the males as an alfa male (masculine, protective, possessive, provider) and the other one as a submissive woman (beautiful, innocent, femenine, maternal, cute, they often even are drawn with femenine bodies or sometimes they can be very sexy and lewd but also femenine and fragile). So, it doesn't show a realistic couple and it portray a very sexist rlationship, full of stereotypes. And the most worrying is when yaoi romanticizes rape or abusive relationships. But women often love yaoi because unlike shojo that has slow development and is very childish, yaoi is well... sex and drama.
U are so wrong my friend. Submissive men.. Not woman. We don't fucking think or image ukes as some kind of women. We don't think low of them. There are mangas that are not feminine, or cute ukes at all my Fri. Go ahead and do some researching. There are majority of women who don't like so cute, feminine boys mangas anymore caz it's not so realistic for advance people but we try to enjoy it for the person who drew it if we ever encounter those kinds of mangas. And the people who read and talk shitty bad about yaoi saying disgusting.. really? and saying not to shit to who like it? And giving example of those names? Should I give the names that are not so cuty and give that are like a real deal mangas or with some videos of real humans or real couples? Don't just assume and give comments like those by just only have tried reading it or have seen only that are famous like okane ga nai and similar to those, u bitches or assholes. There are women who love to read Yuri just because it has a slow development and is very childish even though it is not close to yaoi. BTW, this manga is just for a minor. And do u seriously think these things yaoi or Yuri are all about sex and drama? It's only sex and drama some straight stupid guys just to fantasy about girls but of course there are people, men or women reading just for sex. Sorry for being touchy but not sorry. Oh and I'm not a gay guy but a straight woman. And I allow people like u to call me bitch after reading this kind of comment to u guys who comment like those as me and girls think u guys are assholes. Lol that is if u ever come and read this manga again or just to accidently see the comments again. But hope u do even though there are 100% not. But would be glad if sees it or this can be just a message to other people who wants to say like those people. Just had to say it. Peace out.
I loved the art in the first one, although while the plot piqued my interest, it was far too short for me to actually connect to it.
The second one seemed really amateurish. The art was off, and the story started off with a whole bunch of yaoi incest cliches right off the bat.
Younger, spoiled brother controlling the older one, eldest being the child of a mistress, being left out, treated coldly by step mother etc.
If it turned those cliches around and made them interesting, I wouldn't know, because I didn't stay long enough to find out ¯_(ツ)_/¯