Why even making this story r15 why cater this story with scrumptious potential to teenagers (who btw read smut too and would appreciate a few nsfw scenes) if you can cater it to adults and really bring the best out of the intimate scenes. Not saying if should be a buttfuck-every-other-chapter story but this chapter with the first feeding scene had so much potential but because it's r15 it was pretty bland and anticlimactic. No hate srsl, I just don't understand that decision
the other thing is you can also make it sensual and high tension without ANY nsfw scenes at all, but they didnt do that either. a lot of the appeal of the whole vampire genre is the forbidden element of falling into addiction, or the line between civility and gluttony (most apt analogy i can think of is how people like to use pomegranates cannibalism as a metaphor for love)
Guys, let people state their opinions? I started to read this story with interest but lately I've been losing it too, because the story doesn't develope at a good pace. People are allowed to criticize that. It's not all sunshine and rainbows, critique is normal and it helps to express their feelings after the newest chapter. Thats why there is a comment section, so people can share their thoughts.







Maybe I'm not paying enough attention to detail but I don't see a significant difference in the art style. So I'm confused why people miss the old art *scratches head*