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"If anyone were to see me like this, they'd think I was a total perv."The sound of th...
i don't like force, unconsent acts then making it funny as if it's not a big deal. well, in this genre, some might think it's not a big deal. it will now then depends on the reader's preference. seeing the story as a whole, i like how the character of ottowa develops from this shallow surface to the deepest part of a man loving someone. as i go on reading, feels like ottowa's maturity escalated as if it was his natural normal act, i mean, it almost feels surreal that's why i'm satisfied