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I like the story and the characters, but the twin on twin was kind of weird. Even in a yaoi manga, I don't think anyone would get turned on from a sibling (shut up, I know there are a ton of mangas like that -_-)
I kind of hate that the positions are switched now. I like it when the seme is older, strong, and gets jealous easily. Those are like the only kinds yaoi I like lol