There is an odd vibe to this one. It's cute but their relationship feels really iffy and there a lot going on with the potatoes, MCs mental health and a potential yuri side couple that their relationship takes a back seat. The sex scenes honestly feel meh, and especially the second one because the MC was pretty much completely out of it. I just don't feel all that invested in them as a couple, and I have a bad feeling about the ML.
Just finished my second read, this is my favourite of the genre so far. I love the angst of a character who's pushed to the lowest by their circumstances and the reward of them changing their fate to something so heart warming. I've found a few that are similar to this if anyone is interested, but also if anyone has recommendations of similar stories plzzzz let me know, I feel like I've hit a wall and can't find anything similar anymore. :(
Sorry but the female characters body proportions are bizarre looking. They have a tiny waist with pin legs, arms and neck, and then a gigantic chest. It's especially obvious on the FL who often wears trousers and it's uncanny how large her upper torso is. Even when she wears a dress her chest and back looks unnatural in comparison to her waist. I thought it was just her built but it's present on the other female knights too. It's giving Elon Musk meme build but with a snatched waist.
Also, I'm like 13 chapters in and I'm bored af. How is this a 9.5, and based off others comments it doesn't get better. :(
Thanks Noa, sorry you're getting hate. Honestly really surprised to see people getting so worked up by the correction when anyone who had issues with the yoshi translation last upload was mocked. But now Noa puts in the effort to do the story right, they act offended and want to take the moral high ground? Something weird about the logic here, I genuinely thought everyone defending the "dih" thing was a troll? I just find it very ironic. Can't both sides be happy now?
It’s genuinely not that serious but the “dih” part was just humor and the translation wasn’t even bad at all. What are they even trying to fix? There’s nothing to fix, the translation is fine. “Defending dih” as if it was ever that deep, the whole point is that they’re going out of their way to translate chapters and they’re adding humor isn’t even all that crazy. They re uploaded with a “fixed” translation over the one that was already fine they didn’t even put any effort lmfao they just changed that part and kept the rest lmfaoooo
You aren't entitled to praise for translating something if you're basically sabotaging it for people who are taking it seriously. For you to genuinely be that unbothered by the original Yoshi translation I don't think you were emersed in the story in the slightest, so why get so defensive when someone corrects it to make it make sense? You say it's not that serious but you clearly seem bothered.
Yes I’m bothered because the translation simply isn’t that serious to begin with. Sabotaging what? If people were actually taking anything seriously they would buy the actual chapter and read it as I said we’re getting this translation for free, so that’s why I’m unbothered. I am immersed in the story, but a word like dih doesn’t offend me and it shouldn’t lmfaoo if that word offends you or makes you mad that’s just you. Everyone has a stick up their ahh it’s fiction it’s a story











Literally only care about the grey omega dude. I feel like it's already going downhill though with him masturbating to the MC. He's a victim of marking and a fellow omega, so why throw in this dynamic. Yes, omegas can be into other omegas, but it felt off. I would rather him have an obsessive brotherly relationship than one that makes him look like a creep.
Thank you, that’s what I’m saying