beta
Their love is really wholesome and I thoroughly enjoyed the story.
BUT their allegedly hugh age gap (seme mid 30s I guess and uke only 19) is giving me the icks!! Haruki is basically still a child and barely legal… why not make him at least 25? That wouldn‘t have messed with the concept of the story in the least and wouldn’t have felt so wrong.
A seme that is a whole green forest!!! I love it when he tells the uke that he won‘t try to keep him all to himself. These situations usually give me the ick. Like: you are cheerful and outgoing, that's what made me fall in love with you, but now that we are dating please change everything about you cause I’m insecure… But not my guy Misumi! Instead he likes seeing hi bf happy around other people cause that is Saku‘s personality.
Overall I really love seme‘s way of communicating, very straight foward but still gentle and not too pushy. 5/5 for these cuties!!