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I can't explain how this manga changed my life frrrr, I loved EVERYTHING but I was so scared when the amnesia part came up because I was like WTF WHY IS THIS GOING SO FAST? WHY DID THE AUTHOR DECIDED TO RUIN THE GREAT AND BEAUTIFUL STORY SHE BUILD FOR THEN DURING 9 VOLUMES??? it really put me on a bad mood how bad it was getting but when everything resulted in a simple what if? my soul came back to my body and, indeed, IT WAS AN AMAZING ENDING<333
Which chapter is the amnesia part? I want to skip that part
oh it's like in the middle of chapter 33 and most of 34
Thank u
I did my review seconds earlier mangago was down and I was INSPIRED so I'm not gonna let it go to waste. here I go AGAIN:
proportions were certainly a choice and the size difference? laughable to be honest. it was ridiculous how the bottom looked like a quarter of the top almost 99% of the time, some positions of their bodies were also weird and well, bad. the cock of the top was a joke bc this people think the bigger the better, let's not care about how HUMANLY IMPOSIBLE this is lol or at least how bad that's gonna look. their face were good, they looked nice but I can't let go how the head of the top was like a grape on top of a balloon, c'mon author you're not shy to make his dick the length of an arm but you draw the line when is his head? be fr.
about the story, it was simple but not like the ones you read easily just to get entertained, no. even the simple stories need proper writing and this was poorly written, idk if the author just started in this industry but I'm amazed by the fact this was read by an editor and the company and they still decided it was good enough. the author needs to work on their characters and how to develop them and their relationship bc I've read short and good manhwas and here I just got to the end to give my opinion with proper understanding of the story. the author could've used the fight with the dad, the rumors of the bottom, give more depth to the story with the ex and even the background of the top, who mentioned he didn't liked men anymore at some point, why didn't he? they could've used this and the church to make it interesting but they didn't and it just ended up getting to the end with sex (even that has to be well written) and the power of wrapping it up.
I hope the author gets better at developing their characters and their relationship, bc the art is not that bad just need more practice ig. anyway that's all :D