I did not like this. Yes I understand married life and scarred past and all that, but I just couldn’t get the way bottom was.
His character was built to be this unwavering power bottom but it ended up being more of a miscommunicator. He wouldn’t tell his husband important stuff and then instead of talking and coming to a conclusion like adults, he just goes “it’ll be fine, probably.” No son, those are always famous last words. The top was trying to win over him for years and I do believe the bottom owed it to top especially if he was so trusting of him. They were a mess as a couple who’s been married two years.
I also disliked the sudden insertion of a random 19 y o saying he should teach the alpha a lesson. Like??? Child you’re not even in your 20s yet don’t insert yourself in relationships of others.
I didn’t like how the top went out of control too at the neck bite thing. BUT I still think the bottom was worse.
Green top, dumb bottom. Yuuji best boi and Yuito best teddy bear.
WHAT ABOUT SHIRO AND YASHIRO!!! I WANT THEM HAPPY AND NICE TOO!!
I have a cat and Shiro being hurt reminded me of when he was sick and it just overwhelmed the entire cuteness of the story….
I forgot about this…. He’s the OG babygirl.
Im so glad it still was on my list even after it was erased.
But I could never reread it. It’s been 10 years since, and I still can’t reread it.
The story is fresh in my mind and yeah back when this was new, the dynamics were explored yet and a 3way relation in yaoi was not common.
However, I feel like it needs so many more chapters. I understand how the bottom is loved by both of them…. But I wanted him to love the black hair back too.
Isn’t this similar to the “dawn of the dragon” art? I love them sm tho. This should get an adaptation.
How the fuck did it had so many emotions!? Sorry chifuyu I wasn’t familiar with your game. 10/10 I would love for the rabbit’s story too tho
My only complaint is that Ginga deserves more love and attention. I WANTED A SANDWICH GODDAMN IT
Holy shit the extra was so much better than the entire thing, and I love the entire thing.
The age gap….. it threw me off so bad….. usually I wouldn’t have cared but ffs they are like 16-17….
Ik fictional and all that shit but still. Gawd damn
Recently I’ve heard someone talk about the manga called “trickster’s tale”
But I can’t find it here…. Is it on here?
It reminds me of Two Souls and Where The Wind stays.
The perfect amount of angst.
It is one of the best BLs out there. Yes it’s toxic and complicated but so so good.
The author’s note gives so much more insight to the process for this one.
Absolute banger, would read side stories with fighting.
It was pretty funny at first, since it’s literally the “oops I’m so clumsy” stereotype. But add assault by everyone on it. Then it got repetitive.
Is it good? No
Is it bad? No
But is it fun?? Also no
If you’re reading it, that’s just for the love of the game.
But holy shit the way their spines bend had me clutching my pearls. It’s way too extreme and might even break. It feels painful. The PT in me was horrified every time.
Also if they’re 6 years apart, that would make yohan 26 and Sol 20…. So why is yohan drawn like a dilf while sol looks like his best friend’s son?????
Also I wanted a switch with Joseph and Liam….
I’ve been here since the beginning. This is the only story I’ve been actively commenting on, since it started… it was such a great ride.
I loved every panel, every dialogue, every twist and turn of this story. I loved Brett and Hayden. I loved how expressive the sex was. I loved how each character had their own complexities and it made you think for a second. I love everything about it and I think this story has a special place in my heart.
Now to the ending…. I feel a little robbed to be fair. It was a lot more rushed than what I expected. To be honest I don’t even remember Brett’s brother’s marriage and stuff. Guess I need to reread. The last few chapters, while pretty much maintained the tension, felt a little flat. I am not saying i didn’t like it, but I also didn’t not dislike it. I feel a bit unsatisfied. The last chapter was pretty smooth, but I feel we should have a little more insight to them. A bit more to the post-rut clarity, a little better conclusion to the chasing arc….. I hope we get side stories.
Again, despite that, a 10/10 in my book. Or maybe I’m just emotionally attached.
Sei finding out everyone is fucking everyone and getting a fever is so hilarious. It has made me realize that in all of my same-sex schooling (practically my entire life), everyone was fucking everyone and only *I* didn’t know.
Lowkey makes me feel left out.