I read it and I'm looking for the whole seme not suffering. Oh he does and he does some groveling(not enough in my opinion) but he does eventually.
Come on guys is just a short story and yall treating it like it's an epic novel written in facts. It's just a story and like any story some like them some don't.. I think it's ok especially if you don't get all bogged down with nit picking but to each their own
I'm going to keep reading this. The story gets rocky here and there but so far it's getting interesting. Hang in there guys!
Thank you to the reader that posted the novel! PEARL CLUTCHING