It's a cute story but my only criticism is how the author just slapped on facial hair on his chin and that's how he looks middle aged and calls it a day... there's not even wrinkles which could indicate a more older vibe (tbh this is really just a nitpick of what I find attractive)
Seeing as that's a humanoid girl, this is probably a harem then? I'm barely tolerating Lilith and was just staying for the doggos and their cuteness.. I don't know why but I can't seem to enjoy this :(( I'm sorry Melt, may you be a good doggo and survive till the very end
Spoilers...
Definitely a generic story of villainess trope who has a passion for a certain hobby... there's not really any depth to the story as of now. Plot reveals are kind of underwhelming including the holy knight being royalty and all. World building or even the foundation of it is close to being non-existent. The only struggle MC has right now is the dilemma of becoming saintess or running a bakery.
You say that people in your kingdom aren't familiar with spices, which might imply that they are uncommon and therefore are more expensive. And yet here you are selling it at such a cheap price to residents who might have a lower income than you. This also includes presumably ingredients that seem hard to come by even for commoners. I'm no expert in business but wouldn't you suffer losses rather than gaining profits? Unless that's a really rich country.
I sometimes like mary sue characters (heck there are probably even some that are well-written) but with our MC here, she's just a typical mary sue with no depth :))
MC also being here about wanting introduce the spirits to the heroine when she already knows they choose who they like?? And even got debunked by your own siscon brother that anyone can stage what the heroine did that you witnessed.. :)))
I will still be reading this though for any major plot points. I've already put it in my reading list lmao but I doubt I would be waiting for this because I might even forget this existed LMAO
AHWIN SINCE DAY ONE!!! (I'VE BEEN BINGE READING THIS SINCE YESTERDAY) I FEEL SORRY FOR THE GRAND DUKE BUT ALSO THINK THAT HE'S THE BIGGEST LOSER BEING THAT HE GOT REJECTED BY TWO FEMALE LEADS OF A DIFFERENT STORY LMAOOOOOO
I can see the hate on the ML. It looks like he likes FL too but he's too idiotic to realize that so he settled for a bitch who knows her sister likes someone and still kisses him. The ML is definitely dating her because she's somewhat similar to the FL.
This is definitely just a manga to pass time... I can clearly see the story which she meets her sister, gets kidnapped by her sister's partner, the duke hears the news of MC being gone and then he realizes that he doesn't want her to dissappear and loves her blah blah blah they live happily ever after
The sister's M.O. will be definitely be because MC is missing so she'll have to fill in MC's shoes and marry the duke
?? That's it?? No confirmation if the girl even went back??
I loev the runaway brides trope so much especially when they have a child. Cherry on top
Do you have any recommendations (人 •ᴗ•)
Idk why but this feels so rushed.
Their characters seem shallow. Why is there even a Dark magic teacher? He asked his class what happened to the student who awakened Dark magic and they answered/expected the student to have been executed. His response indicate that there might be something more to the story.
But then later he just looks like a villain. This some confusing shizz.
The story is just there without any foundation to the world building.
Female lead. A bit bland.
The little sister. Inferiority complex much?
The male lead. Meh.
I'm an avid villainess/shoujo academy reader but even story doesn't have anything that's making me stay.
Every chapter I gag thinking that this will probably become a 3p relationship... Chris just gtfo