beta
i HATED the 2nd ml. they put so much emphasis on him being a good guy but he was scum. I hated him at every turn. He would not take no for an answer???? Its his best friend??? WTF?! I liked Reita well enough but dropped this at ch 26 bc of fl. shes insufferable and doesn't want to just say what she thinks. no one respects each other
dropped ch 4 cz the whole story is so stiff and forced. The idea is good, but... poor execution.