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was annoyed by the coincidental author thing at the beginning but pleasantly surprised by ace mc? it's cute and the characters feel a bit real which is something yaoi tends to lack............
c1: okay so he's a gyarados - gotcha
c2-50: (@_@)
c50-70: oh wait I think I caught the plot!
c70-130: lol jk but the main couple's cute so there's that
c130+: okay - up to like 70% plot comprehension... I think
But seriously there's so many AU, cutscenes, flashbacks, etc. in every chapter.... I was very confused.... but also wasn't reading too thoroughly but still enjoyed the ride.
also highly amused by the very suggestive beginning and mid chapter art combined with in-story excessive magical butterflies and jellyfish of censorship
lol poor thing. I think the problem are the english raws, they got a lot of part cut. I've read it in spanish and I get the plot quite well tho the level of censorship it's the same coz it's still chinese manhua ╮(￣▽￣)╭