She has no personality, come to assumptions because the plot requires it. The guy? He has this feeling of being slimy and it's just not my cup of tea.
The paneling and the storytelling it's not there, litterally, we see nothing and things are just told and not shown. Then at the scene at the start of chapter 3 I just quit. What is that supposed to be? A Fish plastered on a bed?
She has no personality, come to assumptions because the plot requires it. The guy? He has this feeling of being slimy and it's just not my cup of tea.
The paneling and the storytelling it's not there, litterally, we see nothing and things are just told and not shown. Then at the scene at the start of chapter 3 I just quit. What is that supposed to be? A Fish plastered on a bed?
All in all, this is not how you tell a story.