The pace of the story is so rushed that it confuses me. Feels like the author is giving up and wants to quickly end it.
while you're at it, get rid of the "not falling in love" clause... I wanna see some lovey dovey scene.
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The pace of the story is so rushed that it confuses me. Feels like the author is giving up and wants to quickly end it.
while you're at it, get rid of the "not falling in love" clause... I wanna see some lovey dovey scene.
Valid outburst from our mc. No one wants to be lied to and I applaud her for not forgiving him so quickly. But look at those tears (i_i)＼(^_^)