The Noble Pirate
It was good…until the FL decided to confront her enemy without ANY preparation, backup, plan, and everything besides a gun-fully knowing he’s the one who killed her before, she has no physical prowess over him, she’ll be surrounded by his minion. Just the usual knowing it’s a trap, no planning at all to counter it, and just straight heading for it. Just the typical plot you see in disappointing stories.
Spoil You
124-this was okay at first but became stupid when the FL just always welcomes the obvious traps (she even opens the door of her home for her ex for something she can call the cops on, or goes down to take a package when she clearly has bodyguards that can help because she’s pregnant and she knows she’s being targeted), or maybe the BRAINLESS AUTHOR(S) JUST FORGETS THE PREVIOUS PLOT DEVELOPMENT OR ERASES HIS HISTORY FILES BEFORE WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTER. Then there goes the ML who can’t even save the FL on time. The plot should’ve been better if not for the intervention of brainless authors or maybe passing the storyline for others to continue it.
A Second Chance at Love