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What they did to keana deserves to be turned into a fungus but still keep their mind so they can see their impending death.

Going from chapter to chapter there is big gaps in story like large chunks of pages are missing, take 62 to 63 for example, it goes from talking to the woman to a wager over soup, how did it get to that point?

That idiot is about to be so unemployable he couldn't even get a job cleaning dog poop from public parks.

I really want to see one of 2 outcomes, either the MC gets his revenge on the sleazeball and tells the family that betrayed him to kick rocks,
OR,
The sleazeball's actions are revealed and all his wealth and status is taken from him and he is banished where the MC was and the women that betrayed the MC want the MC back only to find him happy with the goddess and the baby goddess.

I love the moment the abusers of the MC finally realise the mistake they have made, whether thats because the MC comes back and puts them in their place or the consequences of their actions bites them in the butt. It's always gratifying.

The chapters seem to jump halfway through missing a few pages to a lot with the story getting difficult to understand with major plot points and events missing.

I liked this title, i know all stories must end but i really liked this one, it was so cute and wholesome.

I like how his first thought wasn't just his own body, he thought of the other character and proposed to diet together.

.....getting what you always wanted but not knowing what to do with it once you got it.

I swear i have read this before, this story seems so familiar, yes i know the returned over powered hero is an over done cliche but i mean how they did this one seems more familiar, like when you copy your mates homework at school but don't copy it exactly so the teacher doesn't suspect you of copying.
Soo edit, i found the story i thought it was "The Hero Who Returned Remains the Strongest in the Modern World" and yeah, definitely a copy my homework but don't make it look like a copy" situation.