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This is going to be an unpopular opinion: I read this, it was fine, but it didn't really make me feel anything. There's nothing wrong with it, I just didn't get hit in the feels. Maybe I'm the only one? ┑(￣. ￣)┍
i really liked both of them. To be fair, a lot of classically problematic tropes showed up. But, by the end, I didn't care anymore, bc they were so darn cute!