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Didn't read it, just skipping through cause I lowkey dislike Liam coz he is a slut. And I lowkey like the way Derrick manhandled Yuri when he kissed Nox when they did a group. Like Derrick my man, you're so charming I wouldn't mind you topping all three of them.
I'm not one to judge based on the opinions of others so I gave it a try and I liked it, and I'm loving it. The devotion and the backstory is pulling my heart strings. Like what the others said, the MC didn't plan to watch ML grew up then make their past known like grooming him, no, it's beyond that, it was the MC's way of fulfilling his desire that led to his immortality, watching and guarding the ML. And about hurting when he saw the ML and his girlfriend, who are we to judge him if it hurts him? Does it mean that he was waiting for ML to grow up? No! He was just reminded that his past lover was no more and his reincarnation was living his own life. It's just a realization, it doesn't mean he has an ulterior motive. After all, his feelings wouldn't be erased after yearning for his past lover. And if the MC really planned it from the start he should be a yandere no? But he is not. It's just when he saw the thirty year old ML that it started being questionable and how he acted upon it, but if you're an adult and with consent then it's fine. Don't give me shits about manipulation and pity act, I don't see as that, all I see were two adults, one with sane mind while the other not so sane anymore. Hahahahaha