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Have you ever tried this page called Picrew.me ? I use it whenever Idk what to draw, you can create some good characters, it’s in japanese but is rlly easy to know what to do. Here are some I made to draw them later. You should try it is rlly fun!

2021-06-05 07:28 marked
I need help because I wanna use this story for something good but I don't know how to or where to use it .

( Don't mind if the spellings is wrong or I miss these little things "," or put them in the wrong place and other stuff )


In 1964 a young 13 year old boy name Jordan Marfey lived with his perants Marie Marfey aged 54 and Mark Marfey aged 57 they lived as a happy family no secrets and no fake little smiles.
Everyday was a normal day for them Jordan and his father Mark would be up bright at 6:30 on the clock no later no earlier, Jordan and his father were busy men working deep in the forest chopping the best wood they could get.
Thats how everything went for the next few years.


6 years later 1970 aged 19 now .
Jordan had still lived with his perants, still down in the forest alone chopping the best wood.
His father had became to old now to chop as hard as he could so he was no use anymore.
After a while nights after nights Jordan would be home an hour later, Jordan would come with the fine cut wood at 11:40 sharp every night but now that he came later at 12:40 he would still have the same amount of fine sharp cut wood no more no less.

A year later 1971 aged 20 .
Jordan had now moved out of his perants place and down in the forest.
Jordan had became more quiet and had become more busy then before from when he was 19 years of aged.
He had become more interest in going deeper and deeper into the forest to the point of lostness.
His perants had not heared of him for months now and had started to get worried.
One day Jordan had been out since 5:20 to go down to the millyfore lake and was now 8:36 .
On the same day his father had decided to take a trip and visit him, he arrived at his son's house at 9:05 at the dot.
As the father stepped inside the air was cold and the smell stank of dry blood.
While the father who tried to pass it off as something like cutting himself by accident or anything else, he noticed a pile of papers on the table.
As nosy as the man could get he lifted the first paper up after a few seconds he dropped the paper, as the paper flew around in circles it took a right then had flew into a bucket of water.
The father stood there his face as white as a ghost and nearly not speaking he said.....
' A hired hitman for Maire Marfey and Mark Marfey '


That's all I've got so far so could you tell me what you think and maybe give me a few ideas?...
Thank You
2021-06-24 20:44 marked