THIS PMO SO BAD like I’m fine w the plot change and shit, I’m kind of just treating it like an au, what’s pissing me off is how they’re always having sex and the chapters are genuinely two pages long so we’ll get 3 chapters of sex and one chapter of story
It's basically just porn with the tiniest amount of story trying to hold it together. tbh I've ready porn oneshots that were better written than this lol. No shade to anyone enjoying it, I'm still reading it too. But this is pretty bad.
I can deal with everything else but piss and why was the liquid coming out of his ass yellow agghhh I can’t