I love the concept so much and the characters have a lot of potential but I can't help thinking that that there's so much more to be had with the story, especially the pacing. It all feels so rushed and underdeveloped, almost like a last minute execution of a draft. I still really like the story but it left a lot to be desired.
He's a sex worker (I'm assuming). I mean, grind, babe! The pacing is way too fast and not much development of their character nor relationship were made despite there being a heaty kiss at the end. I'm sticking around to see what happens but so far, pretty average
Entire story fucked for me cus of the aunt, I hate it when they try to spun it as thought she was the victim, no tf she aint
Like she have no right to cry!!
WHYYYYYY keep the boy when you couldn’t look at him?
if really she felt guilty she should have showered him with love and affection, not freaking gave him a shitty childhood
EXACTLY i know JP's adoption system suck ass but holy shit, imagine being neglected AND abused by your own FLESH AND BLOOD, ah girl has NO EXCUSES as a grown ass ADULT and a MOTHER???
they never tried to make her the victim. they just explained how she acted. plus she was probably suffering from PTSD and ppd. yaoi readers really have no media literary.
The narrative clearly was shifting the blame and making it so that she has less fault than she actually does, also PTSD and PPD literally is no excuse — talks about media literacy coming from someone who says 'they just explained how she acted' as if there wasn't an entire scenes of flashbacks and excuses and talks about how "she wasn't at fault" and that "she's forgiven" is kinda hilarious of you tbh, do you not have reading comprehension skills?
Some of yall got the shittiest taste and I meant it derogatively cus wtf, this is like the easiest VS ever of love interests and still some root for the emotionally constipated and underdeveloped mfer
Edit: lowkey came off so aggressive, I'm so sorry, I was so frustrated LMAO
Imma start using emotionally constipated as a term now. Thank you for blessing me with this. I also totally agree, I root for the green flag as well. They all deserve to live happily and I hope "Mr. I'm too big and bad for emotions and empathy" just gets hit by truck-kun(may have spelled that wrong forgive me).
tysm, some ppl just don't seem to get this
Eh who cares honestly, we don't have to care bc the green flag is end game!
Cliche characters with a good plot, there were so much potential for better story lines, political drama, characters' decisions, etc., but this wasn't written with as much thought into it as it could've been so, overall falls flat in a lot of area
This feels so uhhh delicate to read, like I was doing that ghibli movie voice acting in my head for the characters, they're so warm and yellow
All them fluff ao3 fics tags are coming 2gether for this one, Oblivious, Idiots, Requited Unrequited Love, so cute
Don't forget Childhood friends to lovers
You're so right, how dare I forget that
Mutual Pining, Slow burn...
YESSS MUTUAL PINING
Never have I ever been more glad for my 3rd grade Thai knowledge LMAO I can understand more than I thought I could of the dialogues
I wish I can learn Thai too but currently um learning Japanese well self study I just want to learn but since I'm lazy I don't know Japanese that much and even learning higarana I'm getting lazy what about Thai damn it'll take my whole life to learn this two language ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Japanese would be harder, alphabetical wise since there's a shit ton of it, but then Thai's ain't easy either if you're not used to style of the alphabets. I do think it'll be a lot better to invest in one language at a time, with dedication to it, get familiar with the language through hearing and seeing as you learn its linguistuc structures.
Good luck with your studies friend!
Thanks and my dream is to work in Japan but damn I hate me laziness personality studying is hard so I just imagine I'm in Japan and going there meeting handsome Japanese highschool students and wearing a Japanese school uniform hahaha my imagination is kinda big but I know it will just in my imagination so the only thing that I have is learn Japanese (￣∇￣")
I plan to move to Japan myself in the future so I get u! You're already making an effort for a step towards ur goals so that's great in my book