beta
All the build up was good and all that, but the conclusion is kinda rush, the affection shown on this chapter feels kinda forced that it looks awkward, unlike the author's other story, which is BJ Alex, there is a proper resolution and bridging between the characters, but here horsey does not feel horsey anymore or at least his unicorn side.... I hope special chapters can still redeem this story...
authornim pls give the fox something like give him something to be less bitter (lol) AND I can feel Nain too, those meaningful questions from the past chapters are not so empty ╥﹏╥... And this chapter is too short but I guess it's better then nothing (￣∇￣")