my only thing would be that I found a few typos and it seemed some sentences couldnt fit in the text boxes and so they were cut off. other than that the translation was good i wasn't confused unless i was completing the sentence of doing a few grammar corrections XD but id still give it about and 8 out of 10
I was honestly hoping that Fetechou would turn into a human there right at the end and that i would get to see him and naerim get married ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ I had too high hopes and feel a little bit let down with the ending. all in all this story came in waves, it kinda felt like I was reading the same situation twice just for a different character in the second volume, and a few things were still left kinda unresovled like what happens with jina and why she still acting dumb like why she no grow up and apologize for being a stupid teen
(╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸 that's fine tho cause people are like that irl, anway i would have liked it if there was also a bit more back story with some of the side characters too. tbh this story could still keep going but I won't push it i loved reading through it most of this is just random late night rambling anyways lolz(≧∀≦)










They really about to walk in like "we taking back our girls!" I can't wait! lmao (≧∀≦)