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I don't understand why this has almost a 9 star rating. This no more than a 7 when you are generous.

Nothing was planned out and the author just goes with the flow. And it shows in the way of how the story progresses. It gets more ridiculous as it goes on.
The plot is shallow and coincidence driven. Important things happen out of nowhere without so much as a short explanation with a quick flashback.
Drama happens the moment someone says anything without verifying it. People go ballistic with just a mention of something.
An example
Person A: "Person C has done this and that, you should punish it." *smirking*
Person B: "WHAT!? I SHOULD KILL HIM AND TAKE EVERYTHING AS REVENGE!" *goes red from anger*
Something like this happens every. single. time. No one would be so stupid to take everything as is without verifying. You can't be a politician and take everything at face value. And all the bad guys are doing this.

And speaking of politics. Oooh boy.
The politic is nonexistent, there is just drama. The realationship between the Benedict Empire and the Astor Kingdom should be as victor and loser of a war. There should be consequences for Astor as the loser. They are only sending a hostage that was not a hostage in the end. And what else? Nothing. No reparations or other conditions. They aren't even forced to become a vassal state. Benedict just let them be and so they were up to no good again.
Way to go, this is how you assert dominance ╮(￣▽￣)╭
And where the hell did Dylan come from? He appeared out of nowhere without even mentioning him first. There was only ever the princess of Astor mentioned but never a prince.
I could go on and on.


And as this a work from an artist that is not so experienced (to put it lightly) I won't divulge into the artstyle, just the art decisions. Only a few things that I didn't like in generell.

The Faces. There were many people that are prominet in panels and even talking, but they didn't have faces. Even when they were in front of a person that DID have a face. That was annoying and the most prominent thing that caught my eye.

The Beast-Humans. I generally don't like when beastman have two pairs of ears. Either have one pair of ears that transforms into animal ears or have animal ears from the start. Period. But this is not the only work that has this problem.
The second issue I have is the colour of their ears and tails. They are all white. Why are they white when practically everyone has different hair colour? Why not make the ears and tails the same colour as the hair?
And why are most of the tails standing straight? Is something pulling them up or are they wired?
It's just so weird ╮(￣▽￣)╭


If just the story was more fleshed out and not something that a 15 year old fanfiction writer created, this manhwa could be much better. As it is now, it's just so flat and shallow and undeserving of the 8.8 rating. I was expecting something more.

They can't write a single chapter without doing it. Why can't they a break? Is it so hard to just have a few chapters with wholesome family moments? The chapter startet so sweet（/TДT)/

Ok, let's see if I got this right.

This happened before Ch. 1:

We have two Seonwoos. One in the real world (RL) and one in the monster world (MW).
The Seonwoo in RL played a game when he was 9. This game transported him into the MW of the game. I'm assuming the Seonwoo of MW got in turn transportet to RL but I'm not sure of that yet. But considering everything and the comment the mom made in Ch. 61 it is heavily implied.
Ch. 61 follows the RL Seonwoo that got dragged to MW before Ch. 1.
So, the Seonwoo of RL, now in MW, lives there and opened the clincic.


Now Ch. 61.:

The RL Seonwoo sees the screen that says "System restoration in Progress". And right after that he wakes up in an unknown place. And we learn of the past (explained above).
RL Seonwoo sees his ID card, his mother calls and he knows that he is back in the real world.
He is back in the world that he left 20 years ago.

I think this about it. Two people got switched and isekai'd.

This story is one my favorites and to hear that the artist is gone hurts. This Manhwa is now on the brink of being cancelled and I sincerely hope that the publisher is betting on the popularity of the work, giving it a fighting chance and getting a new artist on board with a fitting artstyle.

And I must say the timing couldn't have been worse. Season 3 was just 8 chapters in after a 5 month pause and now there is a indefinite Hiatus. I think it would've been better to extend the Hiatus after season 2 altogether and search for a solution.

I really wish that the publisher is coming up with a new artist in time. I don't want it to be axed （/TДT)/

Wow, SO much kinky stuff. There should be a proper warning and not just for foul/sexualized language...
So I'm doing it now.

WARNING:
Exhibitionism, Fisting, Urination, Zoophilia, double Penis, Egg laying (in combi with MPreg)
These are the heavy contenders. Did I forget something?

The story is 95% sex. And the only "normal" chapter is the last. So it's practically just a long Hentai, especially because it's uncensored.
This Manhwa certainly isn't everybody's cup of tea ╮(￣▽￣)╭

Is ist just me or is there a chapter between 138 and 139 missing? Because I don't see the connection between the end of ch. 138 and the beginning of ch. 139...

Wow, I never saw a "couple" with less chemistry. They aren't talking to each other but standing back to back - not even touching - and talking to the great void. Do you know what I mean? They are living in two different worlds and are not even talking the same language.
I was frowning the whole time and asking what the point of this story even is.
"Freezing Point" was kinda okay (this story has issues too) and I was curious how the story would further unfold.
But I have absolutely no idea what this mess was.
Everyone has serious psychological problems and I would recommend a therapy
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It says it's finished, but then there is season one end just 3 chaps before the end. Then there are so many topics that were not adressed. What's with the diamond, what happenend with the shitty father and his crime, what happend after mcs suicide? How come he traveled back in time? Because there is always a reason or cause for this.
Come on, give me answers.

And I'm pissed off (╬￣皿￣)凸

1. They translated Black Scythe's Class as Assassin and not Grim Reaper. He's not an Assassin. His class has nothing to do with it and it makes in context no sense. Give him his Grim Reaper class back!

2. They're censoring curse words like "shit" and such, but showing blood and what not. Make it make sense. Either do the censoring for both or for none.

Was anyone triggered in the same way or is it just me?

Anyway, I'm off to Asura. They are calling Black Scythe a Grim Reaper and are not censoring the curse words. The tl is a little wonky in the beginning, but it gets better.
Or will the official tl change the two points later on? I only read to ch. 4. I was too triggered...

This one is the most worst case of 'dominant society' in all of the omegaverse stories I've read up until now. In second place is "Night of the hunt".

The portrayal of the society in which they see the dominant as the better human and the recessive as low born third-tier is unsettling.
The whole society is identifying themselves on basis of their secondary gender. It's as if they have no means, talents or whatever otherwise. Even the most stupid dominant has more to say than the most intellectual recessive.
If you are not born a dominant you are done for. Worst if you are recessive. Then you are treated like an illness and parents don't want you near their children in fear they may present as recessive.
Just like the tinfoil faction that's saying their children may become autistic if they are exploited to 5G or what other stupid theorie they come up with.
The society in this story needs a huge amount of therapy.