Pacing is atrocious.
Chemistry is there but needed time to cook.
And I really wanted the album cover's design to have a bigger impact
I think there was something very interesting with the plot and the worldbuilding and the couples, but everything just...happened in a vacuum without reason.
What a shame
Wow everyone failed the poor protagonist...nobody gave a damn about his opinion at any point, especially about the forced pairing.
Have been SO GOOD in visual storytelling and using the title as integral part of the narration, giving it a central focus and thematic relevance.
Gosh I also love how we got a flashback of all their various moments from previous chapters BUT THE PRECIOUS MOMENTS? IT'S JUST PRESENT DAY SOL. 10/10
God the whiplash was real.
I went from 1: oh an omega future friend! 2: pls be lesbians 3: yay lesbians 4: wow it's the main couple but genderbent and switched to 4: THE PARENTS?????????????
Didn't know she wanted to be the Teletubbies' sun
Lmaoooo
How can this story get better and better each story/chapter.......incredible writing.