the story had to be short or else the misunderstandings would've bored us to death. still, i feel kinda sorry for not getting the chance to see more of doyoung and jaeha development. maybe if the focus were in a slow burn slow paced relationship between them things would have been better. i feel like the comedy is good but makes jaeha's feelings be taken lightly - he moves on from hyun and falls for doyoung too fast. then, jaeha and doyoung are basically failing in communication and you don't get to _feel_ that grief and other uncomfortable feelings that usually follows when you give up on a love.
nways, liked the side story a lot, it was cute to see their friendship as grownups.
i was really looking forward to the next update because i assumed this would be longer, giving us the chance to see their relationship development and hidaka dealing with his powers. now i am just... shocked (?) it's over.
up until chapter 4, i felt the story was progressing in a good pace, but chapter 5 felt so rushed - as if the author had to finish the story abruptly. in a single chapter we had jealousy trope, confession, +18 scene... i feel like things could have been slower.
oh well, it is what it is. anyway, i am happy i got to read this, the plot was pretty interesting!
not my boy trying to learn how to fight while watching gangsta movies i am not moving on from that