Interesting plot.
However, something is lacking
Maybe pace , maybe too much shit to solve thrown to the MC all at once?
Anyway, will be continuing this
4 stars frome me for now<3
That makes sense for a game. You have like one main quest and side quests get thrown at you left and right. And while you're doing a side quest, another ten gets thrown at you. It's just a way to keep the players engaged and have stuff to do. But it does get overwhelming sometimes.
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That being said, she seems too lax in caring for her kid. No wonder he died everytime











NOPE
I think I know where this is going and I won't push further
Peace out.
I had to go back to chapter 22 to see what on earth you were talking about lmfao. Come back man, this isn't that type of story. If you're gonna drop it for anything, drop it because the MC is a silly fucking idiot (affectionate, but also I'm annoyed)