Now here me out if this had a better story line it could be really good artwork is great but the storyline not so much and it doesn’t really make sense topped with the fact that it’s really random the top would’ve be really good with the crying n shit just like a really soft top but they made him a complete asswhole who’s just really whiny and has huge personality gaps bottom yeah no change really needed there











The ending seems really forced like the author had an idea for it but someone else came in and was like I want it done now it definitely do have smth promising like they could’ve made it to where they where a crazy couple or they could’ve made it to where they have children atleast and their happy but naw had to deprive us