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WHAT THE FUCK?! Hell nah, either I'm still half-asleep or I'm understanding everything wrong, I refuse to acknowledge this situation... FUCK THE NOBLES and FUCK THE KING for abandoning them.
FUCK I'M NOT SATISFIED, I NEED MORE! I HOPE TO SEE THE FALL OF THE KINGDOM, CUZ FUCK THEM FUCK THEM FUCK THEM!!! I WANT THEM RUIN AS MUCH AS THEY RUIN THE NORTH.
FUCK RUIN THE KINGDOM WHO ABANDONED THE WINTER FORTRESS, LET EM TASTE THE FRIGID COLD OF MOTHAFAKING WINTUUURR
Reading the comments and realizing that a lot of ppl doesn't like the ml pov and some even think it's unnecessary... funny, cuz i personally don't agree with their take; the misunderstanding or this romance thingy is dragging the plot.
Cuz even before the real conflict/start of the story happened, the ml existence to our mc is already HUGE and MEANINGFUL.
Which makes his POV valid, cuz in that way, I finally understand why he has feelings for her (cuz at first i thought his feeling is cliche and not that deep which is not, that man is pathetic yearner [affectionate]).
Plus the ml's family is literally the reason why the mc suffered? His POV gave us the freaking light and to assume and deduct stuff; something close to the truth.
We also saw the glimpse of mc's life during the process of her agenda to turn back time. We did saw some stuff on the first chapter, but from the ml's pov, it adds more details and highlight on how much our mc suffered.
And I don't think it's dragging the story LOL we're still at 60 chapters... TOO FUCKING SHORT. I'll only agree that it's dragging the plot if we're already at ch. 100 + and we still don't know anything regarding what happened and who's behind in mc's tragic circumstances.
Plus idk if you guys are actually reading, but ofc the mc wouldn't immediately act to avenge herself, she's fucking traumatized for fuck sake, she wants control with her life, something she never had before time regressed, SHE'S TRYING TO REGULATE HER EMOTIONS AND KEEP HER SANITY INTACT CUZ SHE'S SCARED OF LOSING CONTROL OF HERSELF AGAIN.
so it's vv understandable if the revenge act is gonna progress slow cuz she's in the process of recovering.
Duh?
I DEFINITELY AGREE ! I was so shocked when it was revealed that the cause of why the cursed sword came to the Roaz family was because of the banquet. From Eckie's conversation with Nicol, since they didn't know the truth, they only assumed that the Roaz family was just picked out of convenience. Somehow, it feels like a loop, you get what I mean?
Additionally, in my opinion, ml's flashback showed us that he understood her, he saw her 15 years, and it was even more heartfelt because his kiosa saw it personally. We also got to see that he was in fact yearning for her, from the banquet, the subjugation—through her time in prison. At least now we know that his feelings wasn't just a spur of the moment thing (subjugation).
Somehow, it's amazing that they both turned back time for each other but also, for themselves. They both want to protect each but at the same time, they don't wanna deceive one another.
And the way ml and his kiosa discovered that fl already reached "zenith" was so argh Makes us recognize ever deeper how much she has gone and fought her way through to reach that level. She is truly strong
I DEFINITELY AGREE ! I was so shocked when it was revealed that the cause of why the cursed sword came to the Roaz family was because of the banquet. From Eckie's conversation with Nicol, since they didn't know the truth, they only assumed that the Roaz family was just picked out of convenience. Somehow, it feels like a loop, you get what I mean?
Additionally, in my opinion, ml's flashback showed us that he understood her, he saw her 15 years, and it was even more heartfelt because his kiosa saw it personally. We also got to see that he was in fact yearning for her, from the banquet, the subjugation—through her time in prison. At least now we know that his feelings wasn't just a spur of the moment thing (subjugation).
Somehow, it's amazing that they both turned back time for each other but also, for themselves. They both want to protect each but at the same time, they don't wanna deceive one another.
And the way ml and his kiosa discovered that fl already reached "zenith" was so argh Makes us recognize ever deeper how much she has gone and fought her way through to reach that level. She is truly strong. This is perfectly paced, in my opinion because there is still a lot for us to uncover.
omg I didn't know my reply was sent twice, sorry !
Did I miss something? Why did the insight from the ML getting hate?
I do think this type of story-telling is a nice breeze, or maybe it's me who didn't read enough stories with similar genre. And also this ML's pov bring more depth in understanding the plot for reader and not just left us swallowing the overused misunderstanding with no good/healthy communication between the charas. I mean this is a good way to explain the no communication without miss communication.
This does give some frustrating feeling but in a good way, imo, because the reader doesn't being left hanging with wild deduction to predict how the story would go and second guessing why the characters were written like that.
I agree !