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Their relationship is cute, I hope they kiss soon... but before that open up to eachother. I hope he realizes just how much she loves him and I hope she realizes he too feels the same.
I want him to learn of the fact that he is her only reason for living... and I want some healing and angst.
Finally, I don't hate Heli, I kind of hope he can mend his friendship with Kaelus over time... I think it'll take a long time... but I hope it happens... and I hope he eventually finds himself someone who will support him with his duties. He has a lot of responsibilities and I hope he'll get support for that. I do think he needs to repent for a long while before that though.
Diana on the other hand... so far I despise her. She is a dependant hypocritical airhead who is arrogant and believes her frugal life style makes her better than everyone. She is delusional, rude, and judgemental. I think if she was only kind her powers would not dissappear, I may be wrong though. I think her powers stemmed from selflessness, desperation, poverty, and the desire to make the world better... and she has lost that. She has become dull and arrogant and contemptuous towards those she desired to protect.