beta
Man this was a little painful to get through. I wanted to like it so much, and I was rooting for our couple and still am but it felt like whole chunks were missing of crucial parts of the story but that’s just how it was written?
Came to say the same. Great idea, poor execution. And what was the end? I felt it was completely unnecessary and ruined the few good things going for it.
This is actually quite wholesome and domestic, refreshing (=・ω・=)