beta
- despite almost everyone saying it’s bad or ‘just ok’ I really find it interesting. I do think it’s well written.
- the art style is *chef’s kiss* I really like how everyone’s face is different. I’m just really used to this same art style wherein everyone looks the same.
- however, there’s really some unnecessary scenes here that maybe made some people bored. Like where FL suddenly runs away, I fr skipped that whole chapter bcs I know damn well she’ll be caught few hours after. Dumbass.
- overall, it’s really good. I swear guys.
Boring, yawning, sloppy.
The best thing that happened here are the kids
If it was that bad.....homie.....how did you make it all the way to the kids? Tell me you skipped a loooooot
no fr cause if it was that boring why the fuck they go through all 100 of these chapters?? i would have been bounced
As someone who has a thinking process of reading what I just started until the end even if it isn't my taste, I think they're the same as me, like they read it through the end to be able to see what's gonna happen and make their review of the story. (⌒▽⌒)