im a bit concerned on their familiar status but yeah the story was decent
i used to love this, i read it on the original site im pretty sure but i dropped it years back..i never understood how the gf got into the relationship knowing her bf is a crossdresser and was fine with it until it inconvenienced her.. really sour and kind of to how trans people are viewed and/or fetishized by the world !
i only started this cyz i saw that there was only 2 chapters but yeah it’s very cute. i can’t stand a tsundere too long so im glad it’s short but also the art is unique in a cool way i like it
let’s stop writing in assault as a means to push the story further but ignoring that…the story is cute. im so gay for ukes that r allowed to be slutty ^_^
my little rant ofc u don’t have to agree but i wanna get my thoughts out since its like 3am for me. i love the little found family, it’s adorable but the people around them just have to go.
ml being completely out of it so much so that he assaults the mc, not really a great way to start off the story but fine. ml apologizes and recognizes his mistake, awesome now we can move on to their love story.
lowkey anything after the 6th chapter is so…skippable. the mc was targeted by some random guy that knew the ml. mc was later on kidnapped and then almost raped. neither the kidnapper nor the guy that unintentionally(?) sent the kidnapper got any repercussions. we get extra story sure but what else? what was the point of the ml facing all this.
Tens real father shows up, spews a bunch of nonsense for a few days then leaves. besides finding out who Ten belongs to and that the sister really loved her brother, what exsctly was the point of this conflict.
now we have the brother who is causing more drama. all of these conflicts don’t really have anything to do with the family itself but the random ass people in their lifewhy are y’all here??? what purpose do they serve fr. a good thing i can say it that it doesn’t last too long and everything gets solved in under 10 chapters
you can truly tell this was a story of its time. the wife role being compared to the housekeeper made me a little upset but the early 2000s reeked of misogyny which is an explanation(not an excuse) for the type of lines that were written in this story. overall really good, i don’t mind it being wordy. the problem with a lot of manwhas that i read today is that there’s unnecessary conflict and this story doesn’t really have that !