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please,,, please someone make elrein & El [THE FUCJING PROPER ONE FUCK THAT BANANA BITCH] familial fanfics please ive been waiting ever since I first read his and no one has made even one and I c a n t h a n d l e t h i s
the pace is rlly confusing and rushed at times, and there were so many plot holes that werent solved properly or just wasnt solved at all.
i only decided to read it again now because it was finally completed and bc /bamf women with swords/ but the story itself is so weird, they couldnt convey themselves properly.
also i may just be used to bl manhwas milking their series with epilpgues and side stories but the abrupt end with barely any closing remarks by neither the characters not the author themself rlly peeved me
idk its an ok story to kill [a lot of] time with but definitely never again