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i don't even understand the reason behind the second couple existence but the most annoying part is they show out of nowhere we're reading about one of the main couple then we blink and the second couple is fcking like what's the reason exactly? i always get so confuse while reading this story, most faces looks the same and when i want to focus on hair color it can't help me that much the sudden jumps between past and present i don't even know i'm treading the past or present all these are confusing enough and then there's second couple fcking for no fvking reason in the middle of some so called serious matters and make me more confused. and didn't the second couple had some problems too? what happened to that i don't even remember a thing about them other thab fcking!
the author trying so hard to turn yahwi into a psycho and bad person what's going on? i know he wasn't a good character from the start but he wasn't a psycho but the way the author bringing every bad things they can think of in this story for yahwi to do is annoying it's like they don't know how else they can make jooin being ended up by cain and the whole purpose of everything they're doing is just that they want jooin and cain being the endgame but they don't know how to do it? idk dear author probably making jooin having a character development finally and he choose doing the choosing like a sane person is better option instead of making yahwi into a psychopath and cain into a love crazed i mean can they stay a sane person you can choose between two sane person too there's no need for everyone to be crazy :) this story is the literal definition of disappointment, jooin is a confused b**** who wants everything and nothing he just gets mad like sir if you're that mad first pick a side why are you getting mad at others giving false hope here and there to everyone instead of thinking? if he's not ready why is he wants to be in a relationship so bad and cain is a liar like throughout the whole story he just lying lying lying about everything from the start literally a manipulator and what? he told his family he's not happy with them like wtf they love you raised you for you to say all those cruel things to them because YOU WERE A DOG IN YOUR PAST LIFE? please be serious sir and yahwi turning to a paycho sob story obssed mf like i'm tired he's constantly crying making sob stories boy stop it's not cute anymore wdym suddenly you were afraid of kissing because of your mother and then magically got cured by kissing jooin, why no one acting sane in this story
Facts! This author's shitty