Lemon ラムネ

The beginning of the story is fantastic. I would say up until chapter 47 is where it began to fall apart. It was already falling apart a bit when Isaac was passed off to the vamp family but they could have made that work.

There were so many good moving parts. I think the strongest was Giselle's fertility. She kept saying that it wasn't her issue but Carter's. They literally had it built up that right after sleeping with Isaac she would have gotten pregnant so there! it was Carter being impotent! But also it would be right after her taking the infertility medicine! So Carter would still blame her. I think it would only show who was in the right when Giselle would have a cute lil vampy baby and Roxy would still not be pregnant like she did she would. This would make the power dynamic between Giselle and Carter constantly flip. It also would stay on track with the story's period drama, telanovela vibe.

As a writer myself, I believe the story was planned beginning to end. And the ending we got was not the intended ending.

I honestly feel so bad for the author bc I have a feeling it's publishing company bs. Like the people releasing the comic thought it wasn't getting enough reads or attracting the right audience or something. Bc the last chapters truly feel like a rage quit of the author. Like -

"what you want more action? Here's your damn action. Story's over. Three chapters is all you're getting. I quit!" Kinda vibe.

This is such a tragedy. Not the story itself, but how it ended. You can literally feel the author's passion dying between sentences.

I really hope the original author (part of me feels like they just picked another random author to finish what another started. I have no proof but it really feels that way) can make what they want, how they want because they have some incredible talent.

This was a beautiful story. It just was never finished.

well god damn shawty