I already hate how bl writers use rape as a plot
You are telling me I’m suppose to like that guy whatever his name is, meanwhile he had his “mafia”/“name plate” the whole time. Like if you gave it to him he would have been able to provide his identity and that freak wouldn’t need to play in his butt, maybe you could have been the first to play in his butt.
And I see the comments talking about threesome, the king, and etc.. everybody is overly horny and that’s why you are reading this
Let me go cleanse my eyes, all I wanted was a beautiful yaoi book with enough smut and a good storyline
I just came from reading the main shit to this shit. I’m at a loss of words
Before I said Wookyung and Minho deserved each other. This isn’t even bdsm anymore this is just SICK WORKS
I thought the author would make Wookyung introduce Minho to different bdsm plays and somehow they would fall in love and be a couple and Minho would be a housewife who gets dicked down
There’s levels to this shit
And this is up there
Welp I’m glad he realized his faults to Doona and apologized in his dream. Lowkey wished the author didn’t show her face I’m sick thinking she is in a world till figuring out if she will fall for Haesol or not
Listen if I could draw I would come up with better non rape stories but I can’t so I will just shut my ass up and judge
Haesol
Gyerin
Doona/Duna
Wookyung
Minho
Haesol is a sub male
and he interested in exploring S.M due to his interest in a fem dom
Has no self respect and blindly in love with
Gyerin is a freak Bob
Who works in her sisters’/friend sex toy shop
Well educated in the bdsm world
Her only flaw was that she started to like the fem dom
Doona is a fem dom
Who’s ex berated her and manipulated her to think it was alright of him to dog her out in public and private
Due to still having feelings for him she hurt everybody she messed with
Wookyung is a bdsm expert very sadistic
He had a sub before and when he noticed Doona interest in bdsm he slowly introduces her to it
He likes her face but doesn’t want to sub for her so not compatible
He is also interested in Doona ex cause he has a cute crying face
How he trains his sub to be maschotist
Minho is a insecure poor guy
He starts dating Doona but is insecure about her writing so he berates her ( he slapped her once in a fit of rage so Doona take that as I can fuck you up so she whipped and fucked him and rest is history)
His insecurities is on full display when he fails a student for complementing their favorite author his ex and when he constantly verbally attacks when she just trying to get a degree
After experiencing SM he is unable to perform normally anymore and blames his fem dom
My thoughts:
Everybody could die for all I care, I read side story A and loved it so I came to main story to see what it’s about and I SAW INDEED. I saw enough, read it to the end though cause I had to see it through. I lowkey wish Haesol got revenge like he got himself a fem dom that actually cared about him and left her in the dust like Gyerin did. I read a comment that said Minho and Doona deserve each other but I don’t think so. I think Minho deserves Wookyung, you wanna beat someone younger than you up like you are a bum, homeless freeloading bum.
Doona sheesh if you want to be a free person don’t fuck the same people fuck other people, have one night stands, set rules and stand on it( HEAVY ON STAND ON IT CAUSE SHE QUICK TO FUCK AFTER SAYING NO)




