beta
I swear the 1st chapter was soooo strong, but it has such a weak last chapter compared side by side. I'm glad it ended well, but it's just not concluded well to my taste. It's just so rush, I don't think this should be in bl category anyway. It's more like sub category. I hope they show more on what happened to Sora in the mental institute, what happened to Sora parents after that. Maybe the author doesn't have much time for it to be explained but oh well