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I'm sorry but I dislike this story, too many things happen for the sake of them happening with either a really slow build up to the point where you're melting or ridiculously fast where as a reader you are extremely confused as to how it got to this point. Also this is supposed to be an omegaverse?? I'm sorry but this adds onto my point, the writer is obviously throwing different plots into one imagination to try and create something. Dont get me wrong I'm all for slow burn fluffy stories but at some point it just gets ridiculous.

The MC is pathetic. And normally I find pathetic MCs cute, hes just annoying. And the bullies? They are harassing him for the POTENTIAL idea that he is an omega becuase there hasnt even been confirmation he is one. The only times the fact that this world is an omegaverse Is brought up is at the beginning and spontaneous points in the story to prevent the reading from nodding off from how boring it is. Not to mention the bullies are so randomly placed? And when the MC gets saved by his boyfriend(?) He wants to break up, why?? Theres legit no reason for this response other than the writer desperately trying to create unessarasy drama to further the plot. This entire story is just a complete mess of different tropes all thrown together in an attempt to make a story. Omegaverse, sickness,bullying,childhood friends and MORE please stick to one plot devise at a time and work on that. The main plot of this universe is that it's an omegaverse but that's barley explored.
The art itself is beautiful but he way its drawn makes the characters seem LIFELESS the mc always looks spaced out and not even in a cool mysterious way or a ditzy cute way. And when the mc's boyfriend declares that his whole reason for living is the MC, like where did that come from. We got no hint prior that this was the case it just popped up, also the MCs bf distain for omegas was brought up. Never mentioned again.

Sorry if this seemed nit picky I just dislike this story, it had potential but that potential was immediately squandered. I might re check on it later on when its finished but the most j think this story can do to improve itself is to end quickly. Let the mc be revealed as an omega, The alpha gets over his distaste for omega BOOM ending. roll credits.