miffy's Topics (7)

im crineee the way we all dgaf abt the new guy and skipped his lore chapter LMAOO

so far it is so good the plot seems very well paced especially with the heaps amt of dialogue and side comments and long scenes, the development of the characters and getting to know their backgrounds really makes it feel that way as well. I love how each character has their reasonings as to why they are the way they are and you dont hate them for bugging the fl or ml and causing for unnecessary love triangles (cough the prince,, and at least for now!) i love the fl and shes not the typical innocent airheaded dumb mary sue type character as seen with her thought processes and compexity in figuring herself out although i wish she were a but angsty but thats j me personally overall its super good and cutesy so far!!

i feel like theyre rushing it a little now but i still love them sm

I wish her development of her feelings towards him was more realistic, it didnt make sense that she suddenly started liking him despite the trauma she holds of him killing her 6 times. It wouldve been really interesting and cool to see her deal with that trauma more and be j more overall angsty but i also see the attempt of the story being more light hearted even though the plot had potential for overall angst ;; still a cute read and i wouldnt have minded reading more chapters so they could stretch it out more!

this is getting tew goooddd i know we want to see him suffer rn but hes j too cutesy

omg can she stop talking, rlly trying to make us feel bad abt her but shi aint working LMAO

THEYRE SO CUTE STPPP