beta
I loved it but it feels a little unfinished like mara telling his parents and the blonde guy and the girls favor to him . idk if that little side story where mara was a singer is actually corresponding to the story but that also felt unfinished and honestly i cant see becoming a singer something mara would do, mostly cuz of his personality, but also cuz the story shows the two getting anxious when theyre apart in group projects, feels like mara definitely couldnt last on business trips and everything that come with being busy and famous. Sorry if im complaining too much i rlly did genuinely enjoy this story and the character's and overall r story is very likeable and i enjoyed the development of mara (=・ω・=)