I mean, it's not a really bad story but at the same time, if you put in a scene at the beginning of the manga- the one where the brother tells her to lift her skirt and show herself to him- you need to show how he comes to say that- how that scenario came to be. The story barely had any relation to what the TITLE was. I feel this story could have been written better- more smooth, less cleches, more sense.
The only time in which that TITLE is utilized is at the beginning- the prologue. Since then, there was nothing. No attempts made by the brother to see under her skirt or any other female except only in terms of rumours. We don't actually see the scenario occur ourselves, as the reader. It's like these scenarios are just tossed in there and that's the end of it.
I couldn't care less about the incest but this story did end up being quite disappointing.
ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ - Person who wanted more character development and sense.
Imma slap a young thot for not appreciating another person's personal life. I mean really? To try to find the place he lives? Did you even send a message requesting permission? If she acts like a brat and disrespects either of our boys Imma slap her. I swear. ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
agreed