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arbors June 17, 2021 9:05 am
ion rly comment on stuff much but like what??? is??? this??? i first read it bc it seemed like a cute little story about childhood friend or whatever but like???
1 the fl is boring and kinda rude
2 i was thinking - this is great a het story with sex where the leads don’t look wacky af and the male isn’t uggo - but like the fl is not that cute compared to the mls idk like she’s not ugly or something but this very much feels like it’s supposed to be a y/n
3 so??? much??? sex???
4 isn’t the first chapter like harassment
tbh her being oblivious isn't the thing that annoys me, it kinda makes sense. what annoys me is how ugly they made erwan (also wtf is that name) especially compared to the prince t.t..... i just wish his eyes didn't look like black voids and his hair didn't look like a comb.