Dropped at Ch 45....
Honestly I liked the beginning. It definitely had potential. But the story started to get more convoluted. It felt like the author wanted to produce a complicated, angsty storyline but couldn't think of a complex plot. It became a hotchpotch of as many tropes possible (and I'm not even against clichés I actually like some of the tropes here but it's like soap opera, physics defying level of bs). And it's so repetitive. MC beats 20 gangsters who all have guns alone, orgy flashbacks,bad guy keeps coming back, orgy flashbacks, they're trying to do some politics against the bosses (but ofc, there are no actual tactics or senses involved), I don't even understand what point the author is trying to make. It's giving nothing burger.
You're welcome!
Yeah possibly. The last time I saw some actual buzz about this is when the MC kind of realised he likes Yuta. I've read many chapters after that moment, and that was nice but not enough to save the plot/manhwa. If you check recent comments under the manhwa here, you'll see everyone reading this is pulling their hair out because it's so frustrating. I've had enough....
I've read upto Ch 47 and I love this. Minor observation is that the art style is great, I love their looks, especially the way the children and Gyum are drawn, so pure and untainted. However, I feel like something is missing or that it doesn't look serious/dark/brooding enough at times..? I don't know how to explain it. It's like the depth of the scenario Vs the scene type of thing. Just my personal opinion. Needless to say, they're doing a great job and I did cry at Ch 33.






Guys!!!! stop fucking!!!! AAAAAAA
Also such a turn off every time an uke says it hurts and seme replies just a bit more God bless all the bottoms in the world...
For the longest time I was convinced gjord was secretly a villain bc he does this shit every time it really gets in my nerves. Idk why he can’t just communicate. Makes me think he’s hiding something bad.
Now you've planted a seed of doubt in my mind ;;
I've spend so long reading this story. If it turns out he's not a good guy idk what to do then.
It's just an unfortunate way a lot of smut is written. The bottom has to be small and demure and "pretend" like they don't want it.
When it's clearly consensual sex I manage to block it out, but anything dubcon is like...uhhhh...what do you want me to do with this, author?
Having read Private Scandal by the same author, the author clearly has a type lol and it's the suspicious, mysterious hot and cool type (while they prefer a dependent uke). Add to that the art style (which I actually like but MLs look extra sussy). As good as this story is, it still follows classic yaoi style so communication so communication is off the table
True! And I'm someone who loves cnc, dubcon etc, you name it. I love size difference too. But even someone like me isn't finding it enjoyable. More worried about Sylhan's health atp
Exactly how I feel as well.