beta
i really like the pacing on this one, everything is just to my liking. if i have to change things, i hope they stop making judith a pity party for replaying her family’s circumstances every after chapter bc that gets annoying rq. also, what abt the priestess? did she completely forgot it? bc i hope judith will share the info to ekian/master
Just my opinion.. but one of the least frustrating FL, she is kind but not overtly altruistic, she is not a vengeful boss lady but at the same time is not a pushover. She is rational enough and not too foolish that it makes you want to throw your phone. Overall.. not a bad FL and the story itself is enjoyable
And also she is not the type on FL rely on the sub lead to much and then say ‘oops, did not mean to lead you on’. Quite literally the only person she relies on is the person she likes, the ML, I personally like that touch.
real, i agree on all your points. the reason why i enjoyed reading this was mainly bc of the fl too!! she is very unlike most fls and that’s what i appreciate so much
wow i let this marinate and it actually turned out better than my expectations. i can’t wait for mc’s revenge arc on byron and tell me do yall say her name as ayla or ella? :p